Extreme Revising

His lanky 6'5" body with lots of string like brown hair covered his head and holes through his ears. With his facial hair to hide behind he felt safe from people. Eyes the color of the sky on a clear day showed through his  that his nature might be reserved and withdrawn he longed to be open and outgoing but was afraid of what people would think of him. He did not like the place he worked the customers made him angry and irritated.