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His lanky 6'5" body with lots of string like brown hair covered his head and holes through his ears. With his facial hair to hide behind he felt safe from people. Eyes the color of the sky on a clear day showed through his  that his nature might be reserved and withdrawn he longed to be open and outgoing but was afraid of what people would think of him. He did not like the place he worked the customers made him angry and irritated.

20 Traits

He was tall and skinny with long straight brunet hair. He was quiet and shy but behind his sad blue eyes was a longing to be happy and loud but he was to scared of what people would think of him. He wore gauges in his ears and had glasses with dark black frames. He had a mustache and a beard that covered his face. When he was at work he was grumpy and mad at all the customers but hide behind a smile. He was bored with all of the things he did.     

Credo

 I believe in being early. I am almost always early for classes, meetings, dates, etc. I always try to leave like haft an hour before the scheduled time but I almost always end up leaving earlier or getting to my destination way early. Even if I have made the trip before and arrived way early I still leave at the same time the next time I go. I feel that if I try messing with the times I leave something will happen and I will end up being late for something important.  

Being early means that you care about what you are going to. Being early to meetings and/ or classes means that you want people to know that you are professional and take what you are doing seriously. When you are early to dates it shows that you care about the other person alot and also that you were eager to spend time with them. 

When you are early you have time to do things without distraction that you wouldn't otherwise do like; read,work on something for later in the day or week or whenever, have time to yourself, watch TV on your phone etc.